
SEMAINE 20 – JOUR 2 Vocabulaire + Listening Thème : Consolidation & Written Expression
INTRODUCTION
Hier, tu as commencé ton Writing Project.
Aujourd’hui, tu vas apprendre :
👉 à relier tes idées
👉 à écrire de façon plus naturelle et logique
👉 à enrichir ton expression écrite
LISTENING DU JOUR
COURS ET EXERCICES D'APPLICATION
Regardez cette video, lisez le cours et faites l'exercice d'application en bas.
🔗 Connectors for Writing
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❌ However she is smart… → ✅ However, she is smart… (virgule obligatoire)
❌ Although the rain, we played. → ✅ Although it rained, we played. (although + clause)
❌ Also, I agree… en tête de paragraphe formel → ✅ Furthermore / Moreover,
| Connector | Fonction | Position | Suivi de |
|---|---|---|---|
| furthermore / moreover | Addition | Début de phrase | Clause (S + V) |
| in addition to | Addition | Début de phrase | Nom / gérondif |
| however | Opposition | Début + virgule | Clause (S + V) |
| although / even though | Opposition | Début ou milieu | Clause (S + V) |
| despite / in spite of | Opposition | Début ou milieu | Nom / gérondif ⚠️ |
| because / since | Cause | Milieu de phrase | Clause (S + V) |
| therefore / as a result | Conséquence | Début de phrase | Clause (S + V) |
| for example / for instance | Exemple | Début + virgule | Nom ou clause |
| such as | Exemple | Milieu de phrase | Nom / liste ⚠️ |
| first of all / then / finally | Séquence | Début de phrase | Clause (S + V) |
| in conclusion | Conclusion | Début + virgule | Clause (S + V) |
Analyse de tes résultats en cours...
Write a balanced short essay (80–100 words) giving both points of view and your personal conclusion.
Tu dois utiliser au moins 6 connectors différents issus de la leçon (un de chaque catégorie).
☐ Un connector d'opposition (however / although / despite)
☐ Un connector de cause ou conséquence (because / therefore / as a result)
☐ Un connector de concession (admittedly / it is true that)
☐ Un connector d'illustration (for example / such as)
☐ Un connector de séquence ou conclusion (first of all / in conclusion)
☐ 80 à 100 mots · Paragraphe structuré
It is true that technology has brought many advantages to modern life. For example, people can now communicate instantly across the world and access information within seconds. Furthermore, technology has improved healthcare and education significantly.
However, it has also created serious problems. Many people, such as teenagers and young professionals, have become addicted to their phones. As a result, social relationships and mental health have suffered greatly.
In conclusion, technology is a powerful tool. Despite its drawbacks, it remains essential — therefore, we must learn to use it wisely.








